Texas Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Texas Investors

Texas > Richmond

I am 43, businessman. Interested in all kinds of business that make money.

$2,000 to $60,000

Texas > Houston

I am a 42 years old self employed individual investor living in Houston Texas and married with 2 kids. Worked as a field engineer in oil and gas drilling industry for 8 years. I traded the stock market and have engaged in couple of investments.

$25,000 to $100,000

Texas > Sugarland

Married. IT professional. Masters of Comp Science. Work in oil & gas. Can offer technology expertise. Silent. Individual investor.

$50,000 to $100,000

Texas > Frisco

Background in business management with experience in turn-overs, rentals, and commercial real estate. Highly motivated and organized. Access to a wide [potential] investor group.

$0 to $1,000,000

Texas > San Antonio

We are group of physicians have interest investing in commercial real estate. Interested in Texas or Arizona. Looking for mid level developer who will lead the project and we provide equity. Requesting the developer to be a partner as well and provide equity as well.

$1,000,000 to $3,000,000

Texas > Burleson

I am soon to be 74 years old and I've been married for 54 years to my high school sweetheart. I currently live in the Dallas/Fort Worth Metroplex. I am retired, but I spent over 40 years in the oil and gas industry. My last position was as a regulatory specialist and training developer with a staff of 3. My last major project was a year-long effort to build a tracking system for regulatory issues for field personnel who are scattered from South Florida to California and from Larado to Indianapolis. I was assisted by a contractor who interpreted my input regarding regulatory requirements for the program developers building the back end. I am an accredited investor with significant funds available. My involvement in any given investment will be silent in most cases.

$5,000 to $25,000

Texas > Victoria

I am 34 years old married from Victoria TX. I would love to invest in a Local Enterpreuner who has a sound business plan and experience.

$10,000 to $200,000

Texas > Eden

I am 31-years-old and interested in getting into the investment arena. I have been a gov't intelligence analyst for the past 9 years, but have recently quit my job, so I could move back home to spend some time with my father before he passes away. Needless to say, my life style has changed from what I am used to and am looking for a way to supplement my new lower income.

$20,000 to $40,000